Artificial flowers lay bestrewn
in parody of everlasting life,
their garish petals stark on bed of leaves
which nature had but lately disinterred
from some dark corner of the undergrowth
to make a bed on which their heads might rest.
Of all the graveyard epitaphs on view
these spoke to me the loudest by their silence...
See more floral tributes, perhaps, over at The Mag, thanks to Tess.
And more poetry of all kinds at d'Verse Open Link Night
And more poetry of all kinds at d'Verse Open Link Night
'in parody of everlasting life' - perfect!
ReplyDeleteI like that you focused on the flowers rather than the sculpture.
ReplyDeleteI'd just like to say thank you to Hypercryptical, Jane Healy and Sue for their comments earlier this morning, which I managed to wipe off the face of blogger!
ReplyDeleteIf at first you don't succeed ... glad I found your Magpie!
ReplyDeleteInteresting take, tuning in to the flowers.
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yes, some of the most silent things speak with a loud voice...very nice..
ReplyDeleteinteresting the contrast between the artificial and life...i think we are faced with that one almost daily...
ReplyDeleteArtificial flowers resting on a bed of leaves - there’s more to that then meets the eye I’m sure. As Brian says, a reflection of our own lives perhaps?
ReplyDeleteI like the notion of the artificial flowers a parody of eternal life...
ReplyDeleteI agree with all the above! I always find the artificial flowers so strange in those settings; I never made this connection before. Thanks. K.
ReplyDeleteFinally got here following the links and the trip was worth it. A fine poem and I liked all the connections you made, especially the artificial flowers line...
ReplyDeleteYep, I too, like how you focused on the "artificial" flowers.
ReplyDeleteAn interesting take and well done.
ReplyDeletelove the last two lines- brilliant!
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